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More Than Fantasy

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"Sorry folks I forgot about these photos from Elaine that I took last year.
I uploaded them on my Flickr.com page but forgot to upload them here".

Enjoy.


The Pike
Long Beach, CA

Model: Elaine J W
Model Mayhem
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Image size
717x857px 406.31 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 40D
Shutter Speed
1/20 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
40 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Oct 18, 2008, 6:34:34 PM
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CorazondeDios's avatar
the flash is too harsh on this shot. you needed more than one source of lighting.

her dark hair is lost against the dark background of the sky.

the styling of her hair needs to be further out from the sides of her face. as it is now, it makes her face look too much like an enlongated oval.

She looks slightly nervous and uncertain -- she needs to learn to exude confidence.

Her expression looks a little like "oh you took the shot already? Is this the right expression?"

I'm just saying this because I know you can work well with models who are comfortable with themselves, like Monica.

This girl has pazzazz. She just needs to get some chemistry going with the camera. Maybe a few more shoots with her would loosen her up and she'll start zinging with the camera.